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Back in November, I read a post over at Laurie Purdie Salas's blog in which she called for two poems for her (now) newly released title from Compass Point Books, Write Your Own Poetry by Laura Purdie Salas.

I submitted two poems, one for each of the categories that Laura needed, and was thrilled when my bathtub-related poem was chosen for inclusion. When I was at ALA last weekend, I got to see and hold a copy of the actual book over at the Compass Point booth. My poem is there on the right-hand page, near the very small rubber ducky.

Wanna know what the poem says? Since I'm sure at least one or two folks out there might, here it is:

In the Bathtub of Possibilities
by Kelly Fineman

I am:

    a landscaper
        clearing a lake amid bubble mountains

    an admiral
        directing battles between rubber ducks
        and drakes

    a mermaid
        my hair a floating halo
        or fishnet

    Now, Alice
        in a towel
          too big for the rabbit-hole drain







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[info]amanda_marrone wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
Fabulous poem--I could picture several illustrations in my mind as I read it! Congrats!!!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]slatts wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 03:45 pm (UTC)
Great poem!
WOW!

exactly what [info]amanda_marrone said!

pictures and all!
Re: Great poem! - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]boreal_owl wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 03:47 pm (UTC)
I love it! Yah!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]robinellen wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 04:00 pm (UTC)
Very cool -- I love your finesse with words, rhythms, and meanings -- wonderful!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC) Expand
(no subject) - [info]robinellen - Jan. 18th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]deenaml wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
You are so good at this. It's great!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 05:05 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]liz_scanlon wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
Alice in a towel....
LOVE that...
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 05:06 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
This reminds me of all the things I pretended to be in the tub while styling my hair with shampoo. I now love watching William do the same thing!
Tricia (Miss Rumphius)
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 05:05 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]linbinwriter wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 04:53 pm (UTC)
I especially enjoy the last line. The photo is too small to really see the photo but I'm sure it's cute and you look good holding the book.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 05:04 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]lisa_schroeder wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
Ahhhh, I ♥ the last line about Alice! :)
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 05:25 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]jamarattigan wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 05:57 pm (UTC)
Love this! You've really captured that unwavering childlike spirit of "possibility." Wonderful images. Rub a dub, Alice!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 06:59 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]ajboll wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
Hooray!
Is the writing poetry book specific to children in anyway. Writing for children or children writing poetry? I'm looking for resources for my adult writing poetry for children class this spring.
Re: Hooray! - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 06:59 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]tamarak wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 06:44 pm (UTC)
Phew!

Now I can sleep again. THANK YOU.

Nice work, Fineman.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 06:59 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]lizzybee999 wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 07:10 pm (UTC)
I loved it!
those images are soooo universal -- the poem is perfect, and the title is absolutely wonderful. I'll look for the book -- I have a feeling I'd like to share it with fellow poets in my Cub pack.

Hooray for Poetry Friday!
Re: I loved it! - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]christy_lenzi wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
Kelly, you Wow me.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 08:45 pm (UTC)
Mermaid Stanza
Great poem. Really liked the contrast in the last two lines of the mermaid stanza especially.

-John Mutford
Re: Mermaid Stanza - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 08:53 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]lorrainemt wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 09:30 pm (UTC)
You know what I love about this poem? It's the feel of a world wide open with possibilities that kids are so open to, and we as adults often forget about.

Great poem, Kelly. Congratulations!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 10:36 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]kmessner wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 10:19 pm (UTC)
I love this! I'll be sharing it with E at bath time.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 10:37 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]minabirdwriter wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 10:26 pm (UTC)
I love this, Kelly! I saw your later post about getting the books in the mail. I'm reading this to my daughter...
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 18th, 2008 10:37 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]jeannineatkins wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 10:51 pm (UTC)
yay
most awesome
Re: yay - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 18th, 2008 11:24 pm (UTC)
Congratulations, Kelly -- it's great! Your bathtub runneth over!

Becky at Farm School
http://farmschoolathome.blogspot.com
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 12:54 am (UTC) Expand
[info]writerjenn wrote:
Jan. 19th, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
I especially like the choice of Alice for one of the images. It's not an obvious or hackneyed choice, so it's delightfully unexpected. And it works! Thanks for sharing the poem.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]lizjonesbooks wrote:
Jan. 19th, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
I love it!! Esp. the least bit...
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 19th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
Many congratulations on the book inclusion! I love this poem. I think I may use it to help my students. We have been talking about how poems paint a picture in our minds. This is a perfect example because they will either have done this before, or will do it that night when they get home. Thanks for sharing.
Lisa :)
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:40 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]slayground wrote:
Jan. 19th, 2008 05:49 am (UTC)
ALICE!
You rock.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:41 pm (UTC) Expand
(no subject) - [info]slayground - Jan. 19th, 2008 11:01 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Jan. 19th, 2008 11:35 am (UTC)
cloudscome says:
Congratulations! I wish I had run into you at ALA to see it and you in person. That ending really kicks!
Re: cloudscome says: - [info]kellyrfineman - Jan. 19th, 2008 03:28 pm (UTC) Expand
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