Good day, and welcome to the Poetry Friday roundup.* I hope that if you're participating this week, you'll leave a link in Mr. Linky, below.
Today is leap day. First, a leaping sort of poem from Wordsworth:
"My heart leaps up when I behold"
by William Wordsworth
My heart leaps up when I behold
A rainbow in the sky:
So was it when my life began,
So is it now I am a man,
So be it when I shall grow old
Or let me die!
The child is father of the man:
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
The poem is a single stanza containing nine lines, and follows the rhyme scheme ABCCABCDD. It's composed of iambic feet, the number of which vary in different lines. Lines 1,3,4,5,7&8 have four iambic feet each, for a total of eight syllables. Line 2 has three iambs (six syllables); Line 6 has two iambs (four syllables); and the last line is in iambic pentameter (five feet, ten syllables).
The differences in line length create a variation in the weight of the lines. The 6 "regular" lines are set-ups for payoffs in the three irregular ones, so that the rainbow gets a bit more attention by being in a shorter line, and the (melo)dramatic "Or let me die!" gets lots of space and weight by virtue of it's shortness, it's indentation, and it's punctuation. The last line, with its extra foot, slows the ending down, echoing the notion of the passage of time and the seriousness of his closing statement: "And I could wish my days to be/ bound each to each by natural piety."
And now, for a word about February, which, despite its actual length, usually feels like the longest month of the year to me. One of my favorite songs by singer-songwriter Dar Williams (and I have several**), is "February", from the Mortal City album. I love it for its melody and the achingly beautiful cello part on the studio recording and its lyrics, part of which are:
You can see her perform it solo, just her and her guitar, here:
*Posted early because damn! folks have been turning up before midnight lately for Poetry Friday posts.
**Other favorites: "When I Was a Boy", "As Cool as I Am", and "The Beauty of the Rain"



Today is leap day. First, a leaping sort of poem from Wordsworth:
"My heart leaps up when I behold"
by William Wordsworth
My heart leaps up when I behold
A rainbow in the sky:
So was it when my life began,
So is it now I am a man,
So be it when I shall grow old
Or let me die!
The child is father of the man:
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
The poem is a single stanza containing nine lines, and follows the rhyme scheme ABCCABCDD. It's composed of iambic feet, the number of which vary in different lines. Lines 1,3,4,5,7&8 have four iambic feet each, for a total of eight syllables. Line 2 has three iambs (six syllables); Line 6 has two iambs (four syllables); and the last line is in iambic pentameter (five feet, ten syllables).
The differences in line length create a variation in the weight of the lines. The 6 "regular" lines are set-ups for payoffs in the three irregular ones, so that the rainbow gets a bit more attention by being in a shorter line, and the (melo)dramatic "Or let me die!" gets lots of space and weight by virtue of it's shortness, it's indentation, and it's punctuation. The last line, with its extra foot, slows the ending down, echoing the notion of the passage of time and the seriousness of his closing statement: "And I could wish my days to be/ bound each to each by natural piety."
And now, for a word about February, which, despite its actual length, usually feels like the longest month of the year to me. One of my favorite songs by singer-songwriter Dar Williams (and I have several**), is "February", from the Mortal City album. I love it for its melody and the achingly beautiful cello part on the studio recording and its lyrics, part of which are:
And February was so long that it lasted into March
And found us walking a path alone together.
You stopped and pointed and you said, "That's a crocus,"
And I said, "What's a crocus?" and you said, "It's a flower,"
I tried to remember, but I said, "What's a flower?"
You said, "I still love you."
You can see her perform it solo, just her and her guitar, here:
*Posted early because damn! folks have been turning up before midnight lately for Poetry Friday posts.
**Other favorites: "When I Was a Boy", "As Cool as I Am", and "The Beauty of the Rain"
- Mood:
cheerful - Music:February by Dar Williams (brainradio)


Comments
But, seriously? February? Has outstayed its welcome. Still, I'm glad for the one more day because I might finish the Feb Forest in February. Back to editing...Thanks for hosting!!
I found a poem with a leap in it, too, but the leaping doesn't come until almost the end. It's a beautiful poem I'd never seen before by Barbara Ras, called "You Can't Have It All." Well, maybe YOU can, because everybody will be delivering it all right here. Thanks for hosting and I hope you get what you want. :)
Leap Day Baby
And thanks for hosting!
Michele (Scholar's Blog)
Thank you for doing the round-up today,
Stacey
I for one will be glad when February is over. I have spring on my mind and am in today with An Early Bluebird.
http://missrumphiuseffect.blogspot.com/2
Thanks for rounding us up!
Best,
Tricia
Thanks also for hosting today. Should be a fun roundup!
Mary Lee
A Year of Reading
*Sigh.*
I'm in with a poem about STUFF. Thanks for hosting, Kelly.
At Wild Rose Reader, I have a special post for The Year of the Frog. I have an original "froggy" poem and brief reviews of poetry books and books in verse about frogs and toads.
At Blue Rose Girls, I have a poem by Sherman Alexie entitled "The Powwow at the End of the World."
Anyway, I'm in with 15 Words or Less poems at http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/4
and 2 diamantes my teen daughter wrote at
http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/4
Happy Poetry Friday, and thanks for hosting the round-up!
With an original poem (gulp) about a little girl and a cornfield full of bears...
Thanks!
Laurel Snyder
http://laurelsnyder.com
I'm in with Steven Kuusisto. No leaping, alas...
Chris
I'm in with a poem called "Peas"
http://bookmineset.blogspot.com/2008/02/p
John Mutford
~Jennifer
http://www.sailblogs.com/member/marihalo