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Good day, and welcome to the Poetry Friday roundup.* I hope that if you're participating this week, you'll leave a link in Mr. Linky, below.

Today is leap day. First, a leaping sort of poem from Wordsworth:

"My heart leaps up when I behold"
by William Wordsworth

My heart leaps up when I behold
  A rainbow in the sky:
So was it when my life began,
So is it now I am a man,
So be it when I shall grow old
  Or let me die!
The child is father of the man:
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.




The poem is a single stanza containing nine lines, and follows the rhyme scheme ABCCABCDD. It's composed of iambic feet, the number of which vary in different lines. Lines 1,3,4,5,7&8 have four iambic feet each, for a total of eight syllables. Line 2 has three iambs (six syllables); Line 6 has two iambs (four syllables); and the last line is in iambic pentameter (five feet, ten syllables).

The differences in line length create a variation in the weight of the lines. The 6 "regular" lines are set-ups for payoffs in the three irregular ones, so that the rainbow gets a bit more attention by being in a shorter line, and the (melo)dramatic "Or let me die!" gets lots of space and weight by virtue of it's shortness, it's indentation, and it's punctuation. The last line, with its extra foot, slows the ending down, echoing the notion of the passage of time and the seriousness of his closing statement: "And I could wish my days to be/ bound each to each by natural piety."

And now, for a word about February, which, despite its actual length, usually feels like the longest month of the year to me. One of my favorite songs by singer-songwriter Dar Williams (and I have several**), is "February", from the Mortal City album. I love it for its melody and the achingly beautiful cello part on the studio recording and its lyrics, part of which are:

And February was so long that it lasted into March
And found us walking a path alone together.
You stopped and pointed and you said, "That's a crocus,"
And I said, "What's a crocus?" and you said, "It's a flower,"
I tried to remember, but I said, "What's a flower?"
You said, "I still love you."


You can see her perform it solo, just her and her guitar, here:


*Posted early because damn! folks have been turning up before midnight lately for Poetry Friday posts.

**Other favorites: "When I Was a Boy", "As Cool as I Am", and "The Beauty of the Rain"







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[info]robinellen wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:20 am (UTC)
Oh, I love Wordsworth (my favorite poet) -- and very appropriate, I thought, to do the Leap Day post a little early ;)
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[info]kidslitinfo wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
People DO show up early to the party! Makes it even more fun :)

But, seriously? February? Has outstayed its welcome. Still, I'm glad for the one more day because I might finish the Feb Forest in February. Back to editing...Thanks for hosting!!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:36 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]saralholmes wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
Some weeks, I'm scrambling with my Poetry Friday post, but today, I'm not, so I'm taking advantage of your link early offer. Yay!

I found a poem with a leap in it, too, but the leaping doesn't come until almost the end. It's a beautiful poem I'd never seen before by Barbara Ras, called "You Can't Have It All." Well, maybe YOU can, because everybody will be delivering it all right here. Thanks for hosting and I hope you get what you want. :)
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:37 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]gottabook wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 08:10 am (UTC)
I'm up with an original Leap Day poem....

Leap Day Baby

And thanks for hosting!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:16 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]christy_lenzi wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 09:05 am (UTC)
Leapin lizards--it's already Friday--Yay! Thanks for your Leap Day post and for leaping up to host. :)
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(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 09:14 am (UTC)
Try not to die of a shock...
Because I'm in this week !!

Michele (Scholar's Blog)
Re: Try not to die of a shock... - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]twowritingteachers.wordpress.com wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 10:46 am (UTC)
Thanks for hosting
I'm in with a poem about the leap year.

Thank you for doing the round-up today,
Stacey
Re: Thanks for hosting - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:40 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 11:10 am (UTC)
Miss Rumphius Says
Hi Kelly!
I for one will be glad when February is over. I have spring on my mind and am in today with An Early Bluebird.
http://missrumphiuseffect.blogspot.com/2008/02/poetry-friday-early-bluebird.html

Thanks for rounding us up!
Best,
Tricia
Re: Miss Rumphius Says - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:41 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 11:13 am (UTC)
Thanks for the rainbow and the crocuses. I'm SO ready for spring!

Thanks also for hosting today. Should be a fun roundup!

Mary Lee
A Year of Reading
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:41 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]jamarattigan wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 12:05 pm (UTC)
Late last night,some Brownies made some brownies, just to celebrate Leap Day! I'm all about Palmer Cox; thanks for hosting, Kelly!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 12:10 pm (UTC)
TadMack says:
Ach, and I thought January was a long month. It's just all long, at this point. The wind today is gusting at 45 mph and the lights keep blinking. Want to just curl up and read...

*Sigh.*
I'm in with a poem about STUFF. Thanks for hosting, Kelly.
Re: TadMack says: - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:45 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]jamarattigan wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 12:13 pm (UTC)
My link doesn't seem to be working, even after 2 tries. Here's the URL: http://jamarattigan.livejournal.com/78788.html. Wonder if those Brownies are causing mischief!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC) Expand
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[info]writer2b.wordpress.com wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
Mine is a poem about endings of days, but it works for ending the week or month too... THank you for hosting, and for these poems.
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:46 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:03 pm (UTC)
Karen Edmisten wrote:
I'm in this week with an original little haiku bidding February adieu. And, I might add, good riddance. :-) Loved your Wordsworth, and that Dar Williams song is hauntingly lovely.
Re: Karen Edmisten wrote: - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:47 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:06 pm (UTC)
Poetry Friday
Elaine M.

At Wild Rose Reader, I have a special post for The Year of the Frog. I have an original "froggy" poem and brief reviews of poetry books and books in verse about frogs and toads.

At Blue Rose Girls, I have a poem by Sherman Alexie entitled "The Powwow at the End of the World."
Re: Poetry Friday - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:47 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]laurasalas wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the poem and song, Kelly. Beautiful song, though I just cut it off, apparently, when I went to make a comment. Will go back and finish.

Anyway, I'm in with 15 Words or Less poems at http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/48865.html

and 2 diamantes my teen daughter wrote at
http://laurasalas.livejournal.com/48437.html

Happy Poetry Friday, and thanks for hosting the round-up!
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[info]sarahsbooks wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:44 pm (UTC)
I went the no-brainer route and posted a version of the standard Leap Day poem. Apparently there are dozens...
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 01:49 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:50 pm (UTC)
I'm in!!! at Kidliterary...
I'm in at http://kidliterary.blogspot.com/

With an original poem (gulp) about a little girl and a cornfield full of bears...

Thanks!

Laurel Snyder
http://laurelsnyder.com
Re: I'm in!!! at Kidliterary... - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 03:59 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]liz_scanlon wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 01:57 pm (UTC)
Loooove Dar Williams.

I'm in with Steven Kuusisto. No leaping, alas...
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:05 pm (UTC)
Great Poem
I am leaping that we have had a spring like week. Thank you for hosting.
Re: Great Poem - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]simpleordinary.blogspot.com wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:23 pm (UTC)
I'm in over at The Simple and the Ordinary with a little A.A. Milne today.
Chris
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:14 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:50 pm (UTC)
Peas
Love those Dar Williams lyrics. Thanks for sharing.

I'm in with a poem called "Peas"
http://bookmineset.blogspot.com/2008/02/poetry-friday-writers-diary-44.html

John Mutford
Re: Peas - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:14 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 02:58 pm (UTC)
Cloudscome says:
February's weather has definitely overstayed it's welcome here too. Glad to hear about rainbows and crocuses. But I am glad for one more day of official Black History month... I have some sonnets from the book Miss Crandall's School for Young Ladies & Little Misses of Color.
Re: Cloudscome says: - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:15 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]paperdollmia.blogspot.com wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
I'm in today with a passage on poetry by Cynthia Rylant and a poem written by 1st graders. No leaping, but happy leaping anyway!
(no subject) - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:48 pm (UTC) Expand
(Anonymous) wrote:
Feb. 29th, 2008 03:37 pm (UTC)
S/V Mari Hal-O-Jen
I'm wrapping up our Everglades Week with a poem by Anne McCrary Sullivan, El Laguno del Espiritu Santo. Thanks, Kelly!
~Jennifer

http://www.sailblogs.com/member/marihalojen/?xjMsgID=48865
Re: S/V Mari Hal-O-Jen - [info]kellyrfineman - Feb. 29th, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC) Expand
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