kellyrfineman (kellyrfineman) wrote,
kellyrfineman
kellyrfineman

The Lai - a Poetry Friday post

This month, my lovely poetry sisters and I took on a form called the lai. It is an open form consisting of one or more nine-line stanzas. Each stanza follows the form of AABAABAAB, where each A line has 5 syllables, and the B lines have only 2 syllables.

I found this one challenging (as my poem illustrates), and the lines felt tight. It was super easy for this to get tight and trite fast. Without further ado, here goes:

When I start to write
in forms, I delight
in play
These short lines are tight
and the rhymes incite
dismay
I worry I might
lack the skill to write
a lai.

As day turns to night
turns to day, then night
to day,
I struggle. My plight
becomes dire. I fight,
I pray,
But try as I might
I just cannot write
a lai.

To check out my sisters' poems, you can go here:

Laura
Tanita
Liz
Tricia
Sara

Poetry Friday is being hosted by my lovely friends at A Year of Reading. You can get to the roundup by clicking the box below:




Site Meter
Tags: forms, original poems, poetry, poetry friday, poetry seven
Subscribe
  • Post a new comment

    Error

    Anonymous comments are disabled in this journal

    default userpic

    Your reply will be screened

    Your IP address will be recorded 

  • 6 comments